Title: Personal goals in Englcom
Thesis Statement: Identifying personal goals in Englcom
I. Introduction
A. Story/Anecdote
B. Thesis Statement
II. Body
A. Personal goals in Englcom
1. To develop critical thinking skills
2. To improve writing skills
3. To improve reading skills
4. To be a creative writer
5. To get high grades
B. Procedures to achieve my personal goals
1. Participate well in class.
2. Be confident when delivering ideas.
3. Absorb all the lessons.
4. Apply the skills you have learned.
III. Conclusion
A. Summary
B. Facts/Quotations
The overall outline was good but one thing I think I could say is about the thesis statement because as far as I know, it should be in a sentence form. Thank you! :)
TumugonBurahinI agree with what Beatus Scriptor said. The thesis statement summarizes the main points and arguments of the author. "Identifying personal goals in Englcom" should have a complete thought and should have a strong argument throughout the essay. Very good structure in outline by the way! :) parallelism was observed.
TumugonBurahinYou might want to improve the thesis statement. It might be too broad. Also, the arrangement of points may still be improved.
TumugonBurahinThesis statement should be written in a complete sentence.
TumugonBurahinSequence your supporting details logically - from the least important to the most important.
Your reviewers/editors are right; you observed parallelism in your outline.